The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/07
I really enjoyed this! The vivid descriptions, such as the husband's "fishy arms," made everything come alive for me as though I were there. The unusual title also sparked my curiosity--I knew I was in for something funny (which this was)!
ROFL! A real "I Love Lucy" story. Thanks for sharing this well-written piece.
02/10/07
Very funny! I enjoyed this one the whole way through.
02/11/07
Yes! This was such a delight to read! Too funny! Totally believable - and that's a GOOD thing. Great job of writing.
02/12/07
Really entertaining, and very well written. I loved how you used the Bible verses and praying for Deena to pass her time. A good lesson on why we should memorize scripture.
02/13/07
Fun.
Loved this. Especially the "gone fishing" sign to place on the door in later years. Neat idea.