The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice. You've captured some emotions I think many of us feel at times. Good rhyme as well.
02/12/07
Wonderfully done...
Nice job. You told the story in a way that helped me to relate to what Peter was thinking and feeling.
02/14/07
With my reignited love and interest of poetry, I applaud you. Terrific job! Blessings, Jo
02/14/07
So smooth flowing and easy to read. I loved this, the feelings and emotions were ones that a lot of us can relate to. Excellent job for capturing this in such beauty. ^_^
02/14/07
How very touching, and written with great skill.
02/14/07
This would be wonderful in a devotional book. Beautiful.
02/15/07
This is part of my favorite story about Jesus! I love it when he fixes breakfast on the beach for his disciples and then commissions Peter to feed His lambs! Very well-written poem!
02/15/07
This is just beautiful! Job well done. Blessings, Cheri
02/15/07
Melanie, way to go!!! Congrats on your EC. God bless.