The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/07
The ending made me a bit teary.
02/10/07
This is very tender, and I enjoyed it immensely.
02/10/07
I liked this very much. It's like a requiem... The father and daughter have come to an understanding, the mother and daughter, the parents, the father and God... very beautiful, very touching, peaceful, a perfect foil against the 'reckless' sea.
02/10/07
I love contrasts in writing or art. You painted a picture where your characters and scenes all seemed in conflict, only to be calmed in the end. Superb job. God bless.
Wow, this is wonderful. It's beautifully written, and I love the dialogue and accents. Thumbs up!
02/10/07
I have a hard time reading this particular dialect, so I think I missed some of the words. But I really liked the story anyway. My heart was touched by the simple, yet complex, family dynamics.
Good work. Compelling. Loved how peacefully the conflict was resolved.
02/21/07
This was so beautiful, it yanked on my heart strings.
I love the title!