The Official Writing Challenge
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The ending made me a bit teary.
This is very tender, and I enjoyed it immensely.
I liked this very much. It's like a requiem... The father and daughter have come to an understanding, the mother and daughter, the parents, the father and God... very beautiful, very touching, peaceful, a perfect foil against the 'reckless' sea.
I love contrasts in writing or art. You painted a picture where your characters and scenes all seemed in conflict, only to be calmed in the end. Superb job. God bless.
Wow, this is wonderful. It's beautifully written, and I love the dialogue and accents. Thumbs up!
I have a hard time reading this particular dialect, so I think I missed some of the words. But I really liked the story anyway. My heart was touched by the simple, yet complex, family dynamics.
Good work. Compelling. Loved how peacefully the conflict was resolved.
This was so beautiful, it yanked on my heart strings.
I love the title!