The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/07
Oh how typical! ;) You've captured the essence of the interrupted, well ordered life by CHILDREN. :) Too funny! (dead minnows and Life Savers in the Baptistery?)

Well written all the way.
02/08/07
This was really cute! I was hoping by the title that this would be a humorous piece, and I was not disappointed. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for a good laugh.
02/09/07
Fast paced - cute - funny yet very real throughout. I enjoyed the voice!
02/09/07
Very entertaining story! It would have made a good "Dennis the Menace" episode on that old TV show! :) Thanks for making me smile!
02/10/07
Now this is a good ol' typical Lynda-esque escapade story! Sweet, endearing and loads of fun. It's nice to read up on my friends' challenge entries again. I've been away too long. Blessings, Jo
02/10/07
Wow, lots of fun pieces this week, and this is another one that had me grinning from the first word to the last. Wonderful!
02/10/07
Very funny - thanks for the laugh. You wrote it so well.
02/10/07
Very cute. If we have a baptism tomorrow during church service, I'll probably start laughing. How am I going to explain that?
02/11/07
LOVE it! I saw the minnows goin' for a swim comin' :) hehehe
02/12/07
Loved every word. Wonderfully creative, left me with a smile. Well done!
Ralphie is adorable. Thanks for a light-hearted fun read!
02/13/07
LOL! That was so funny...that poor pastor...Ralphie sounds like a few little kids I know. Great job with the personality on this piece. ^_^
02/13/07
Loved the title! Ralphie reminds me of my own son, now almost 20! Good work. Cheri
02/13/07
Funny and cute. Welcome to Masters. Nice job. God bless.
02/13/07
I could see it all in my mind. What a cute story. Great job.
Just can't help but think that Ralphie will make a good pastor someday! He's bound to be patient with little children when he grows up. (Hee hee)
02/15/07
Way to go, Betty. Congrats! God bless.