The Official Writing Challenge
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Love it, love it, love it! You simply can't get away with lying (or cheating). It always catches us up one way or another. You did a good job with this one.
Well done. A story with a laugh and a moral is a winner from my point of view.
02/10/07
An absolutely, delightful and funny story; but yes, "be sure your sins will find you out"; great creativity, enjoyable read and loved the adventure! Very well done and writing was supurb. Loved it!
02/10/07
Very funny. When things like this happen, I always think God must have a sense of humour!
02/10/07
Very funny and enjoyable. It seems like it was written from the wife's perspective as she retells the story of how her husband was caught by God. Another excellent entry. God bless.
02/10/07
So clever! I can just see God snickering at his divine practical joke. This is adorable, and I like your use of present tense, it makes the story "read" like a fishing yarn being told orally.
I am still smiling. This is so creative. Love it!
02/10/07
please forgive me for commenting on my article but I need to see if my feedback response indicator is working now that I changed my e-mail! But since I am here, thanks for all the wonderful comments . . . as usual! :)
02/10/07
Yep, that did it!!!
02/10/07
Oh, this is priceless. What a great laugh. Sure hope Chuck's wife has a good sense of humor.
02/11/07
Love it! A great message delivered with a dash of humor!
Yes, I'm sure God does have a sense of humor. Let's hope the wife does.
02/15/07
Love it!!!!! Great job! :) Congrats on the Highly Commended, my friend! :)
02/15/07
***Congrats!*** This is sooo funny ^_^
02/15/07
Congrats, Sue. Looking forward to your fitness on tuesday story:)
God bless.