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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Gone Fishing (02/01/07)

TITLE: The Barnwood Sign
By dub W
02/02/07


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Hurricane Fran took the roof off of the barn back in 96’. For days after that we wondered around our swampy property and the nearby area picking up debris. Because we had used the barn as a storage place, our belongings had become airborne and had subsequently been deposited over much of the countryside.

My dad and I drove the tractor down lane after lane searching for familiar objects. Unfortunately, our neighbors were doing the same thing; there was a regular beehive of slow moving rural traffic all around the county. Among the missing items was a collection of our fishing gear. I think dad was more upset with the missing tackle than me, but he never let on much.

My father was a military man, even after he retired from the service. Everything was in order around our house including the fishing gear. Over the old metal bench in the barn my dad had hung is favorite rods and reels; freshwater gear was separated from saltwater gear and so forth. Between the two sets of rods, hung an old sign; I think he bought it at an auction; but, nonetheless, it was a sign of his retirement pastime. He carved his intials in the corner of the old splintered wood. The only time the sign was moved from its lofty perch was when he headed for the river, then he would hang the sign on the barn door. It simply read, “Gone Fishing.”

Near a local nursery we found several pieces of that old bench, including a couple of bent up fishing poles. But, we never found many whole pieces or the rest of our fishing equipment. My guess is, based on some semi scientific evidence – I knew from which direction the wind came – that most of our stuff ended up in the river.

Dad started getting sick not long after that, had a stroke, and kind of began a downward spiral. He would linger another six years until he joined mama in the Lord’s kingdom.

Not long ago a cousin and I ventured into an antique store near where we live. As we were poking through the collection of dusty memorabilia. I spotted an old “Gone Fishing” sign. No, it was not my father’s sign, though I originally though it might be. And when I asked the shopkeeper about the price, she quoted me a sum that would make my banker blush. It was, I suppose, an antique. I mentioned to her my interest in the fishing sign, and she suggested I check her storeroom – as she said, “there’s a lot of broken junk back there." Her late husband had picked up a bunch of stuff after hurricanes.”

I ventured though an old door into a room of chair legs and cracked benches. Leaning across a corner of the room was a slat of wood, the bottom of what was once a sign. It was full of worm holes, and white and bowed because of water damage. But, what caught my eye more than anything was the carving in the corner of the piece. I carried the board to the front of the store. “How much?”

She looked at the weathered board, “You can have it; it’s just a broken board.”

I took it home and took a piece of old barnwood, then re-created and tacked the sign back together. Then painted above my dad’s initials, “Gone Fishing.” Today, the sign hangs over the corner of dad's headstone in the local cemetery.


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Dolores Stohler02/09/07
If this is a true story (and if it's not it sure had me fooled)it fits the topic better than anything I could have made up. Wonderful story and so well told--a winner for sure! God bless.
Connie Van Berkel02/09/07
I love this story. So amazing that God blesses us with the most benign of things that speak a thousand words. You write this story with great beauty.
Marilyn Schnepp 02/10/07
Such a precious, heartfelt and lovely story of years gone by, sentamental things, and finding a treasure. Loved the idea that it is on the Gravestone. A few boo-boo's, or typos, and wAndering...but overall a wonderful and delightful Read! Really enjoyed this one.
Lynda Lee Schab 02/10/07
Great voice! I did pick up on a couple of the typos but still...a wonderful entry.
Dennis Fletcher02/10/07
Wow, well written, very touching. It kept me reading throughout.
Joanne Malley02/10/07
That was so heartwarming! Well, I must be blind; I only found one typo. Then, again, I'm working on zero cups of coffee so far. LOL Great job! Blessings, Jo
Jan Ackerson 02/10/07
Dub, I just love your narrator's voice. Even your "bad" pieces are delightful and creative.

I'd never do this, ordinarily, but you challenged me, so here goes...

1. '96, not 96'
2. wondered/wandered
3. hyphenate slow-moving
4. "hung (h)is favorite rods..."
5. par. 3, sentence 4, punctuation issues
6. hyphenate semi-scientific
7. unnecessary quotation mark at the end of par. 6

I hope you take this with the good nature that is intended...and I'm hoping my prize is a cyper-muffin. That chocolate one looked marvelous.
william price02/10/07
Typos, schmypos. I'm not judging this week. Just reading and this is a fine heartwarming story with an earthy, real feel to it. Great job. God bless.
Venice Kichura02/10/07
Very heartwarming piece of a beloved dad now with Jesus. I enjoyed this and see the special love you had for your father & his hobby.
Shari Armstrong 02/10/07
A nastaligic feel, loved the ending :)
Sandra Petersen 02/10/07
This has a bittersweet sentimental feel to it. Even though there were typos, I enjoyed reading and savoring the feeling behind the words. Thanks for sharing this with all those who have 'Gone Fishing' with their mom or dad.
Betty Castleberry02/10/07
This has such a homey feel to it. I bet that tractor is a 1946 faded red Farmall, isn't it? Loved the voice. Well done.
Sheri Gordon02/10/07
I finished reading with tears in my eyes. If this is true (& I'll pretend it is), our dads are probably having a great time together fishing for the big one -- and organizing every piece of fishing equipment.
Allison Egley 02/11/07
Ok, I'm going to try to find all your errors also, since you asked us to find them. I did not cheat, by the way, and look at the other answers. Some of these probably aren't even errors, but oh well. I'll try anyways. :)

1. 96' should be '96
2. dad should be Dad since it replaces his name (used twice)
3. is should be his
4. river, then should be river. Then
5. mama should be Mama (see number 2)
6. memorabilia. should be memorabilia,
7. hurricanes" should be hurricanes (no quotes after it)
and one I'm really, really unsure of, but I'll mention it anyway... "...more upset over the sign than me" should be reworded so it can't be interpreted that dad is upset with me.

Hehe so, what's my score? 2/7? ;)
Catrina Bradley 02/12/07
Love it - a great story well told. Thanks for sharing it.
cindy yarger02/12/07
What a fun treasure to find again. I'm glad that you shared this.
Jacquelyn Horne02/12/07
There are so many comments that I started to pass this up. But I really liked this story. The errors have already been pointed out. I would encourage you to proofread every piece until you're satisfied that there are no errors, because the story and composition are very good.
Cassie Memmer02/13/07
I loved the character's voice. Lovely story. Very sweet.
Cheri Hardaway 02/13/07
A heartwarming story. A good read. Thanks, Cheri
Sara Harricharan 02/13/07
A pretty nice story, a few typos, but a nice ending.
terri tiffany02/14/07
So were we supposed to find the typos...'cause I think I got them all too:) But it was tough as the story was so very good and emotional and I hope true!!!
Loren T. Lowery 02/14/07
Your story gives me hope that nothing is ever really lost if we keep looking.

A wonderful story with a perfect ending.
Patty Wysong02/14/07
I was too drawn in to the story to notice, let alone care about typos!!! :-)


   
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