The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/05
Great story. Loved the imagery.
04/18/05
Loved the line anemic as a ghost!
04/18/05
Excellent entry! I was a huge fan of the grease monkey back then. You made your point go down very enjoyably. Great title, too. Thanks!
04/23/05
>>one really could marry outside one's own species.<<

This cracked me up ... along with several other lines. But the point of the piece came through loud and clear... Once we marry a supermodel, we should stay with her!