The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/07
I loved the confession of the dad and how things used to look, the description of the water and surroundings, and the sweet ending. All around great read!
You captured those moments of grief that hold us captive for a while. I like the way you bring us full circle into victory of life.
02/10/07
A lovely, touching story that left me crying again; but such a nice ending...with father realizing that the boy needed him. Very well done, and an enjoyable, but rather sad story. Neat Title. Loved the story and shed a tear or two.
02/10/07
Very sweet story. I loved the line "faded postcards from my foolish youth". I also think the title is so well chosen. Lovely.
Loved this too. Good to see father and son sharing their grief and the wisdom of the father to know that his son is more important than anything else at the moment.