The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting fresh take on "Gone Fishing". I especially liked the line:
(“Why do you taunt a starving soul?” Michael asked as he wondered if this were no angel but a witch whose trap had ensnared him so that he would be doomed to seek what could not be found; to hope for that which was never to come to pass.) It speaks of the longing in our souls.
Nice work.
02/08/07
Such crisp descriptions, a wonderful take on the theme, and I too loved that line. Excellent.
Wow but you are a real communicator & paint such vivid word pictures with your descriptions. Great job!
02/10/07
I loved your vivid descriptions of the scenery. I could see and feel all of it, and it was beautiful.
02/11/07
Wow, a beautiful fairy tale of the vision of Beauty. Fascinating read, and quite unique I must say - but enjoyed the piece immensely. Well done.