The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/07
Brilliant writing. I love it!
What a way to weave a tale. You are a master at the craft, indeed.
What a creative take on "reading". Nice job.
02/01/07
Wow! I was mesmerized! I loved the scenarios. What a weave of a tale. More!
02/02/07
This is so brilliant. I haven't heard or read that poem since I was a child. You did a wonderful job weaving it into your story.
02/02/07
Your intro lured me in, especially the final sentence. I loved this: “I drive by tonight, and push my usual pshaw of noisy, judgmental air through my lips, when I hear: PRAY for her. That’s all He says.” A VERY creative take on the topic and nicely done.
02/04/07
Wow wow WOW! This is so very creative and spellbinding. I love your use of the poem - absolutely masterful!
Interesting way to tell this story. You can't be judgmental and be praying for someone at the same time. God chooses prayer.
02/05/07
AWESOME! What a great way to use that poem, and a marvelous story! I'm totally bowled over by this.
02/05/07
Wow - wow, wow, wow, wow, wow. This is really excellent!
02/05/07
Oh, this was great, as others have said. I love how you wove the rhyme with the story. I especially enjoyed her various "scenarios." "I think I'll go with scenario three." Hehe
The touch of two 'Master's' hands here! Beautifully woven blend of poetry and prose!
02/07/07
Wow - this was the best one I have read so far! WOnderfully done - very creative with the use of the story within it. I loved the ending and loved the voice throughout. Great work!!
02/07/07
I've got chills--because the story was so compelling and challenging, and the writing was that good. Amazing.
02/07/07
Very well done! Love the way you wove the poem into the story.
02/07/07
Wow! Powerful stuff here. Very grab-and-don't-let-go reading! This certainly packs a punch and I liked the switching from the poem to the story. The scenarios were a little confusing at the beginning, but it made more sense when I reached the end. Great work!
02/07/07
great story! The poem is woven into the story like the fringes of a spiderweb. very well crafted. Thanks for sharing it
02/07/07
YOWSERS! Excellent. Masterfully crafted. God bless.
02/08/07
Absolutely wonderfully creative! Excellent work! One of my favorites this week, for sure! Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
Wow! This is awesome! I loved every bit of it. Great writing and congrats on your win!