The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/07
I love this. You have painted such a picture with your words that brightened up the page and excited the imagination of the reader. The surprise at the end just climaxed the piece with your reader of braille.
02/04/07
Excellent description - and I also loved the braille surprise at the end. I was right there from beginning to end.
It had an unexpected ending for sure. I guess the blank pages should have given me a clue. Well done. Beautifully done, in fact.
02/04/07
This was a lovely piece of writing, flowing gently like a clear river on a hill :)
Loved it. Great suprise at the end.
02/05/07
Wonderful--you bring us right into the room with her.
02/05/07
Yes, such beautiful writing that draws the reader in for an awesome punch in the end. ;)

Kudos girl - this is another great one.
02/05/07
Yep. The ending caught me by surprise too. I thought the pages just looked blank because of the lighting, or because she really had everything memorized and just wanted people to think she was reading it. lol Now I want to read her book!
02/06/07
Wonderful story and it captivated me the way she captivated her audience. Wonderful character and wonderful ending. I think it's ... wonderful! Thanks for sharing this
02/07/07
I loved all the details - just enough to put us in the room with her and enough to make us wonder. Nice job!
02/07/07
This is fantasic - great descriptions, heart and a surprise ending. Made me smile and also brought a tear or two to my eyes. Wonderful.