The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/07
Your word usage is so very well done. A good first reading that beckons one to go back and savor each line just for the words! Good job!
02/03/07
Poetic brilliance! This poem falls in line with some of the best poems I've read and needs to be published.
02/04/07
Love the use of the key. This is such a wonderful piece - wonderful imagery and unforgettable lines abound!
There was so much strength and purpose in this poem, not to mention the meter.
I hope you will publish it.
02/04/07
This was a great one. You'll need to go over it again before submiting it somewhere and get it all into one tense as you swung from past to present a few times. I was laughing to myself while reading, as I knew you were going to get to the Bible, but all along you were talking about finding a book to help you fall asleep :) I must confess, it is a good one to fall asleep to :0
02/05/07
Wonderful word usage, imagery, and rhyme scheme. Another winner, Kenn!
02/05/07
Your poetry always seems to have such natural rhythm, Kenn! This one is no exception. It almost demands to be read aloud and savored.
02/05/07
*blush*
Very good! I enjoyed this poem very much!
I enjoyed this very much, expecially the imagery. The easy rhythm seemed to say, "sleep, sleep, sleep."
02/05/07
Beyond the excellence of the technical skill is the message that put a smile on my face and a warmth in my spirit. An anointed combination. God bless.
02/05/07
Oh, this is great, Kenn. The only "problem" I've found with your poems is that they flow so well with the rhythm that I read them too quickly and don't always pick up on the message on the first read. :D
02/05/07
Beautiful poem, Kenn! Excellent word choice and imagery.
02/05/07
How in the world do you think of so many angles in rhythm. Wow!
Every syllable is a beautiful delight, Kenn! Great message packaged perfectly!
02/06/07
An amazing poem! So well crafted and the ending was just perfect. I could see the scene clearly. Thanks for sharing this!
Truly written by a master!
This ministers to me to put God's Word ahead of all other literature. I believe this is indeed a winner.
02/06/07
Well done as usual. I could see every inch of that library!
Would you please publish a book so I can buy it? This was perfect! So full of little things--just two or three little words here and there, that made me stop and think--that was awesome.
Congrats on your win, Kenn!