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Love it!!! I got such a kick out of this--the juxtaposition of the rigid first half, with the later exhortation to boogey and do the peacemakers' jive. How utterly delightful!
Wow! That whole last paragraph in italics, was just amamzing. Very well thought out. Loved it!
Love the juxtaposition of the two completely opposite moods. Extremely effective. I love your language in both. Wonderful.
I love the way you danced your way through this poem/article. It was very clever and the message of course was very sound.
Great contrast between the two halves and I loved it! The form(s) perfectly convey your message. Thanks for sharing it
This is awesome ...
Great contrast here, as others have said. I think I'd spread out the italics so as to make it less wearing on the eyes, and more impactful in the process, but other than that, great work!