The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/07
The setting and atmosphere surrounding this writer is written so beautifully. Like magic. The thoughts are identical to mine..."Help me to understand", but I still am unable to understand some passages; but evidently this writer has found the passport. Loved this entry! Super job! It was indeed "illuminating"...and I'll keep trying for Understanding. Thanks for this enlightening story! Well written. Nice job.
02/03/07
I love the wind blowing through this piece! What a wonderful way to transform a good piece of writing to an absolutely wonderful one. Just that one touch...awesome.
02/03/07
Such a wonderful "showing" of the spirit. I agree - the setting makes this wonderful work even more so.
My heart beats a melody in echo of this wonderful writing. I, too, have sought answers from God, and His Word has whispered to my spirit. The poetic comparisons here are superb. What an outstanding piece of writing! You are an artist with words.
I also enjoyed this. It is such a true story of most of us who try to understand God's word. We really need to talk to the author more!
02/06/07
When I read the first paragraph, all I could say was "Wow!" I think that's pretty much my response now that I've finished reading also. This was wonderful.
02/06/07
I could see this so clearly and your background evokes such a clear and wonderful sense of feeling. I felt like I was right there. Very well done. Thanks for sharing it
02/06/07
One almost feels as though they should whisper after reading this - so awesome and truly connecting.

Every word - fits. I could feel each word - awesome!
02/07/07
This is simply beautiful! It would make a great testimony/devotional! Very good you-are-there atmosphere with real emotions and feelings that I could identify with. I liked the descriptions and the 'conversation' Wonderfully written! ^_^
02/07/07
I can't think of much more to add except against the frigid weather outside, your story is a great defroster. A very enjoyable read.
02/07/07
Mid, I really loved this. It was like a movie with dueling soundtracks, natures windy distractions versus the voice of the Holy Spirit. Its always a constant battle when reading God's Word, to tune out the world and tune in to gentle melody of the Holy Spirit who leads us and guides us into all truth.
Super anointed story. Well written too. God bless.