The Official Writing Challenge
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If I had a son and he was fighting for our country, I'd want to receive a letter like that. Very moving and it made me see this was in a different light.
Sorry - can't edit what I'd written - I meant 'war' not was.
So very moving--I like your line about "stepped back in time", and the son's beautifully expressed letter.

A few semicolon faults in the beginning, but very minor. This is a lovely piece, and fine writing.
Very touching. If this is not a real letter, it certainly should be. Some grieving mother would have a treasure to hold onto.
Thank you for such a beautifully written piece. Congratulation on receiving well deserved recognition.
A FW friend, Verna