The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a nice story with a surprise ending. However, Johananna wanted to start a family with her husband. If I were her I don't know if I would have felt the same about that after he died. But that's just me.
Certainly an unusual way to celebrate an anniversary. Touching.
This is a very touching story. It seems a bit unrealistic, but sometimes that's what telling stories is about. Anyway, it flowed nicely and kept my attention. Nice job.
How nice! Very good work!
Congratulations Dixie on your 2nd place win in both the Editor's Choice and Level 3 Champion Challenge. You weren't that far behind the 1st place winner - so very well done! With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
I just recieved the FaithWriters' book, A Year of Celebration, and read this story. I just had to come tell you how much I enjoyed it! :-) What a special gift. I would love to hear a story from the fictional son's point of view.