The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/05
This was a nice story with a surprise ending. However, Johananna wanted to start a family with her husband. If I were her I don't know if I would have felt the same about that after he died. But that's just me.
04/21/05
Certainly an unusual way to celebrate an anniversary. Touching.
04/22/05
This is a very touching story. It seems a bit unrealistic, but sometimes that's what telling stories is about. Anyway, it flowed nicely and kept my attention. Nice job.
04/23/05
How nice! Very good work!
04/25/05
Congratulations Dixie on your 2nd place win in both the Editor's Choice and Level 3 Champion Challenge. You weren't that far behind the 1st place winner - so very well done! With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
I just recieved the FaithWriters' book, A Year of Celebration, and read this story. I just had to come tell you how much I enjoyed it! :-) What a special gift. I would love to hear a story from the fictional son's point of view.