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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Reading (01/25/07)

TITLE: Whew...Like Reading a Telephone Book!
By Marilyn Schnepp
01/27/07


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The young man walked briskly down the long corridor to Room 419, hesitated a moment, then pushed open the door. Not having seen his old friend and mentor for many years, he didn't know what to expect; but was happily surprised to be greeted by that same old infectious and familiar smile.

Shaking his friend's hand (now frail with age) he pulled up a chair right next to the bed; "So this is where the great professor hangs out, eh? - tucked away in a hospital bed."

The old man chuckled. "Hanging out, you say? Leave it to the young to think of nifty ways to say one's growing old."

Still smiling, the old man reached over and touched the Bible that his friend was carrying; "Son," he said in a raspy voice, "I see you're carrying on where I left off. You're shepherding the flock."

"Yes, Professor, and everything I know, I learned from you."

The old man's face lit up, "Would you do me a favor, Son, and read to me from the Bible? My eyes, you know."

"Of course, I'd be happy to. What would you like me to read?"

"Something from 1st Chronicles, please, if you don't mind."

"Sure!" Although a bit puzzled by his choice of "boring" Chronicles instead of "comforting" Psalms, his young friend nevertheless opened up the Bible and began reading aloud:

"And Arphaxad begat Shelah, and Shelah begat Eber. And unto Eber were born two sons: the name of the one was Peleg and his brother's name was Joktan. And Joktan begat Almodad , and Sheleph and Hazarmaveth and Jrah, Hadoran..." etc, etc, etc,

After a few minutes of reading and struggling with the pronunciation of all the difficult names, the exasperated pastor paused, and glanced over at his friend. Talk about a captivated audience, he thought to himself.

The old man's eyes were closed, a slight smile caressed his lips, and his countenance exuded peace, contentment and serenity. Amazing, Unbelievable; either he has fallen asleep and is dreaming, or...

A bit frightened, he whispered his name; "Tom?"

"Oh, yes," the professor smiled, and without even opening his eyes he let out a contented sigh, "please continue."

The young man sighed also (but for a different reason), then struggled on with his reading: "Shobal; Alian and Manahath, and Ebal begat Shephi and Onam; Elishama and Eliada and Elighelet, by Eglah his wife..."

Thankfully, the reading was interrupted by the nurse. "I'm sorry, Sir, but Professor Barnham needs his rest now; perhaps you can come back and visit another day."

The two friends shared the benediction, shook hands, but before the young man departed... he had to ask: "Why 1st Chronicles, Professor? There's nothing very comforting about a long list of unpronounceable names."

"Oh no, my Son, you're wrong!" the old man said with his familiar, infectious smile; "it's much, much more than that! Reading the Chronicles reminds me that our Heavenly Father knows the name of each and every one of his children by heart. Isn't that beautiful? What a comfort and joy it is to know God knows us...and calls each of us by name."

^^^
Many years later, the young pastor, now old and gray himself, visited the gravesite of his dear friend and beloved mentor. He was remembering the last time he stood in this place. He'd been surrounded by mourners, and although there were wall to wall flowers, they didn't cover the scent of freshly turned dirt in the air, and he'd left with a heavy heart.

Today, he stood alone on a beautiful carpet of green, reading the inscription on the large slab of stone marking his friends resting place.

"God Knows me By Name"

however, for the Edification of my fellow Earthlings

Here Lies THOMAS WILLIAM BARNHAM
1919 - 2002

"So here's where the great professor hangs out," he said aloud, "tucked away in a graveyard, waiting for Resurrection Day when God will call him by name."

He could almost envision his old friend chuckling at his nifty remarks, as he slowly walked away with the telephone book of names in I. Chronicles still echoing through his mind.


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Chuck Livermore02/01/07
Great story. I enjoyed this very much.
Jan Ackerson 02/02/07
Well, I'll never look at 1st Chronicles the same way again!

A few minor mechanical issues--for example, the phrase "he thought to himself" is redundant--who else can one think to?

I was quite charmed by the old professor, and enjoyed getting to know him.
Lisa Graham02/02/07
Thanking for reminding all of us that God truly knows us by name. This story is very stirring and thought-provoking. Your description allowed me to envision the mentor, and the relationship between the two characters was captured vividly.
Sharlyn Guthrie 02/03/07
I enjoyed this story, the humor sprinkled in, and the relationship between the two men. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
Jacquelyn Horne02/03/07
I enjoyed this story. I have to admit I said to myself "I Chronicles?" But the twist was interesting.
Allison Egley 02/06/07
Hehe I figured from the title this would have something to do with genealogies, and I was right! It also amazes me how God used so many people, especially in His own Son's genealogy... Rehab and Bathsheba? Who would think they'd be in the blood line of Christ? Great reminder that God knows are names, and He can use us!
Donna Emery02/06/07
Loved the title and the concept! Very nicely done! Thanks for sharing it
Jen Davis02/06/07
I really liked this story. You kept my attention wondering why he would choose the reading that he did. I also enjoyed the touch of humor interlaced throughout the story. On a serious note, I thought this was a great line: “…although there were wall to wall flowers, they didn't cover the scent of freshly turned dirt in the air, and he'd left with a heavy heart.” You tied the pieces of this story together at the end into a very nice package.
Patty Wysong02/06/07
I loved this! The personalities and humor were real. The last lines really tie the story together quite well. Wonderful!
Mariane Holbrook02/06/07
At first I thought with the phone book reference, this could go anywhere. Someone remarked of the late, great Baptist preacher, Adrian Rogers, that he could read a phone book and it would be the best sermon ever preached." He was that good!But as I read your piece, Marilyn, I could see myself reading I Chronicles aloud and skipping every other word to get out of there as fast as I could. I love your wry sense of humor and how it translates into something beautiful. One minute you make us grin all over and the next we're trying to find the underlying truth of your piece that's waiting to reveal itself. No wonder you're quickly becoming one of my favorites in FW.
Linda Watson Owen02/06/07
What a delightful story!! I too will never again look at the name lists in quite the same way. Thank you, and may God bless your skillful and creative pen!
william price02/08/07
What a cool story. A very creative take on the subject highlighting the importance of ALL of God's Word. I'm encouraged that God knows my name! Thanks. God bless.
Daniel Owino Ogweno02/10/07
MariLyn, this was a wonderful story, beautifully done; so good if I were a judge, it would would have been at the top. Perharps it is because I have, of late, been preoccupied by the meaning behind the "boring" stuff in the Bible. Keep writing!
Edy T Johnson 02/16/07
Your slice of life stories always touch my heart, MariLyn. This is so delightful, and a precious treasure to remind us that the Lord knows my name! God bless you and your writing for His glory.
Marilyn Schnepp 03/23/07
Author's Note to Self:
#15 in Level 3


   
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