The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/07
Weaving the "readings" amid personal thoughts was an excellent idea. Very vivid.
02/02/07
I hope you will write "the rest of the story" some day--this is lovely, and makes me want more.

The topic is slightly weak here, but definitely present. Thanks for giving us a glimpse into your inner musings.
02/02/07
I enjoyed the 'musings' more than the "reading"; but in this Writer's mind, it was the "reading" (Topic, by the way) that brought them to their musings. I liked the brevity of this entry, and it makes sense. Now I must go on to other "readings"...but glad I stopped by. Nice job.
02/05/07
I agree that I'd love to hear 'the rest of the story' one day. This is tenderly written. Lovely. Well done.
02/06/07
I liked this. I agree with the others. It seemed a bit weak on topic, but it was there. I would also like to hear the rest of the story. This would be an excellent piece if it were expanded, I think.
02/06/07
This was nice and I could picture her clearly. Thanks for sharing this
02/06/07
I think the connection to the topic "Reading" is actually strong enough! I enjoyed how the readings led to the musings! Thank your for sharing this! :)
Nice job! Kudos! I like your work.