The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/07
Pretty kewl story. Very descriptive writing. Be careful with "overwriting," one my own writing flaws.
01/29/07
Excellent description - this absolutely came alive on the page. Stunning.
01/30/07
I was utterly captivated by this!
01/31/07
What a wonderful story! The trip sounds incredible too. Also, great writing advice by Dub that many of us can appreciate. The key is to know when we’re going over the top. It’s hard to let go of some of those beautiful phrases that come to us. Last week I read the advice of another author who said that if a sentence does not move the story forward she cuts it out. Ouch!