The Official Writing Challenge
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01/26/07
Oh, my...I read this three times, with growing wonder and appreciation each time--such a gorgeous, rich allegory of the creation. Love your little butterfly-on-the-shoulder, and your shadows and light, and your "let there be trees"...well, I just love this all.
01/28/07
I love love LOVE this! I truly felt like I was transported to another world. So vivid and beautiful and - you said it! - ALIVE.
01/28/07
Ann, this is fabulous, as usual. Extremely creative - you are an artist of words. I always enjoy the references to nature in your entries. Thanks for sharing your gift.
01/29/07
A very lovely story and very rich in details. This was wonderful to read. Thanks for sharing it
01/31/07
It makes me with Mrs. Bentley would show me how to paint, too. :)