The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
An appropriate title and I loved your ending - "It is written". I would like to have felt a bit more emotion throughout rather than teaching - but there is a great lesson in this devotional.
What a great message! I noted a few punctuation errors, but I thought you gave your readers something important to think about.
01/31/07
I really enjoyed this story! I could picture the painting of torment in my mind, even though I've never seen this actual work of art. I could also identify with the feelings and thoughts of the sensitive young observer. Great job!
01/31/07
Whoops--one more comment I forgot before. I love the unusual and dramatic title! That grabbed me and made me want to read this story.
01/31/07
The piece of art you describe conveys your message very well. I loved these two lines: “I know the end. No, it is not drawn or painted; it is written.” (Note a possible suggestion to correct punctuation.) Thanks for sharing.