The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/07
Intriguing page-turner which kept me interested right along with the writer...wondering, pondering, searching. My curiosity made me want to find the treasure also. Nicely done, and enjoyed the read. Thanks! (Sounds like a beautiful picture, and it's sentamental too...painted by a relative).
What a lovely heirloom, and I think that your story does it justice.
01/31/07
This was such a captivating read. You did a great job of pulling the reader in and keeping the reader’s interest throughout. I enjoyed the story and was touched that the painting was done by the grandmother. Thanks for sharing.