The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some excellent points here and your thoughts are well-organized. I was distracted tight off the bat by your use of a singular noun (artist) with a singular article (he, she) rather than plural (they). Your first sentence could simply read, "An artist's heartbeat is creativity. The second sentence could stand as is without the word 'their' in it at all. Tighten the grammar a bit and you will have an excellent piece.