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Quite a lovely, but poignant story. It shows how faith can help people through loss of a loved one and many other crises in life. Only through faith in our Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ. Nice Job.
01/25/07
This one brought tears to my eyes.
Ok, next time you write something like this you have to offer teh public a box of kleenex per person. Sogh, with tears flooding down my face. This is so good, so heart wrenching and makes one apprecoiate and want to hold out loved ones close. God bless you. This is beautiful! If this is just a story it is powerful. If it is from your own experience or someone you know then my heart goes out to you or them.Keep up the eriting, you capture truth so well.
01/27/07
Magnificent story teller here. It's difficult for me to type with tears flowing non-stop from beginning to end...but this entry comes from a Writer. Only true Writers can make the reader laugh aloud, or cry rivers of free flowing tears. Great Job, well written and I.... hope it is Fiction!
01/30/07
This is so very touching. The tears come as we feel the loss of the parents, especially the father as he tries to come to terms with just brushing Evie aside. There is a message here for those of us who pay scant attention to those who need our love and attention. Your writing covers this so well.