The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/07
Difficult to read with no paragraphing and spacing...but thanks for sharing this input with FW.
Nice descriptions and a great story with a good message. I agree , you need to seperate papragraphs for easier reading. Maybbe your format came out wrong when submitting?
01/29/07
Very interesting story with excellent descriptions! Why was she resisting looking at the painting, though, if it took her back to such a wonderful time in her life? Was the contrast between her life now and her life then too great? I'd like to know more! :) Anyway, I'm glad her husband bought her the painting! He must be a very sensitive man! Thanks for sharing this!