The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
HA HA! This was a hoot. I enjoyed every word, even the ones I didn't understand. Thumbs up!
01/25/07
Eish,sommer makes me want to make a lekker braai.I somer get hoendervleis(fowl flesh- or goose bumps.) when I read this article.Very very nice Pieter.

01/25/07
Oh MY - this definitely kept me laughing (and gave me something of a headache trying to figure out what everyone was saying - and since that's your point, I'm thinking you should NOT take that as a criticism.).
Love the last line too.
01/27/07
This was fun. Your character stood up well in the confusion! Good job.
01/29/07
This was very fun to read! Thanks for the creative slant and the cultural deposit. Great job!
01/30/07
I grinned all the way through this--the poor helpless guy! Hilarious!
01/30/07
Oh, Cori, this is a hoot! I've got to admit, even here in different areas of the US I've come near to being in this fellow's shoes! Great writing! Thanks for the laugh this morning!