The Official Writing Challenge
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HA HA! This was a hoot. I enjoyed every word, even the ones I didn't understand. Thumbs up!
01/25/07
Eish,sommer makes me want to make a lekker braai.I somer get hoendervleis(fowl flesh- or goose bumps.) when I read this article.Very very nice Pieter.

01/25/07
Oh MY - this definitely kept me laughing (and gave me something of a headache trying to figure out what everyone was saying - and since that's your point, I'm thinking you should NOT take that as a criticism.).
Love the last line too.
01/27/07
This was fun. Your character stood up well in the confusion! Good job.
This was very fun to read! Thanks for the creative slant and the cultural deposit. Great job!
01/30/07
I grinned all the way through this--the poor helpless guy! Hilarious!
Oh, Cori, this is a hoot! I've got to admit, even here in different areas of the US I've come near to being in this fellow's shoes! Great writing! Thanks for the laugh this morning!