The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
This is very tender. You did a good job of taking us back to a child's desire to really please her mama. Very touching!
01/25/07
This needs a tissue warning. It is so sweet. I'm not sure the very last line really adds anything to this piece, but it so well done, it really doesn't matter. Kudos!
01/25/07
I enjoyed this tender story with the unique art materials and a loving child. This is one I'll remember, and that's one of the highest compliments one can pay to a story!
01/28/07
Very touching and well written. I think I agree though, that the last line was unnecessary.
01/30/07
This was beautiful! I really enjoyed it. Just one thing-you used "And that" twice at the end, maybe just leave out, the last 'and'? Otherwise, I liked the ending of how the 'painting' was still there.
02/01/07
Drawn with love. Precious moments went into this picture that elicited a beautiful story.