The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
What a wonderful analogy expertly shown here. The trust he put in this girl, and his gentleness are absolutely precious. Love the accent as a special little touch!
I love the zing of your last line. Great story.
01/29/07
This is a gorgeous story, one of the best I've read this week.
01/31/07
I would never imagine that bread could be used in such a way. What a wonderful story, and I would love to hear more of the "before" and "after" of this story. You gave us a great story in just a few words. Thanks so much for sharing this
01/31/07
I loved your title and how it applied to the story on two different levels! A very clever use of words to share an excellent message! Thank you! :)
01/31/07
Very visual piece of writing. I love the analogy of the beauty lying under years of neglect. Masterful writing.
01/31/07
Excellent work and analogy here; it was a visual treat.
01/31/07
A very smooth, polished story. Excellent job. God bless.