The Official Writing Challenge
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So touching. I thought I knew where this was going, but I was wrong. I love the last line. Nicely done.
I always enjoy a good story about a teacher. This fit the bill very nicely. I loved the analogy you used.
The last line made me smile.
Lovely. The last line was excellent, and David was such an engaging character.
A prescious story that I'm not ashamed to say brought me to tears. So well done, that I cannot tell if it is fiction or non-fiction. Great job, and interested this reader from beginning to end! Well done.
I did enjoy this. Sorry to be so late reading it, but I'm still finding my way around here. Wonderful, heartwarming story!
Beautiful for the message of forgiveness and for the teacher's heart!