The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the message of hope in this piece. Well done.
01/27/07
Your description is so vivid - absolutely tactile. I also love the hope in this. Excellent.
01/27/07
A wonderful reminder that our protector is always with us, no matter what we go through.
01/28/07
Great characters. A great picture painted by you, as well.
I always thought art therapy is a wonderful thing! I loved that the rainbow means "Hope". Well written.
01/29/07
Okay, you've given me major goosebumps here. Wonderful!
01/29/07
Such a beautiful story, and so creative from the child's viewpoint, from the teacher and most of all by this Writer. A wonderful story of tragedy, but ends up with the symbol of hope. Nicely done.
01/29/07
Very nicely written and a wonderful reminder that He is always with us. Thanks for sharing this
02/07/07
Thank you, Christine, for commenting on my "art" story, which meant I had to come looking for you, too!

Your writing grips the reader, and I loved your character study of Zana. I look forward to reading more from you.