The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/05
Very cute with a good ending. This would make a great children's story.
04/11/05
That was a really lovely story. Dilly certainly demostrated a self sacrifing kind of love.
04/12/05
Great story full of so many lessons. Lessons on free will, independence, jealousy, downfalls of a selfish wisdom, and putting others over self (agape). Great story for the children of God.
04/13/05
Great way to help children [of all ages] consider spiritual truths. Selfishness, pride, rebellion, concern, love, sacrifice. Aesop would be jealous!
04/16/05
What a nice fable with a great message. I liked it!
Excellent story, Lois. I didn't catch it when I was doing my initial browse through the entries. A powerful story with lots of truth tucked neatly and pleasantly within.