The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 532 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
01/27/07
Although some beautiful scenes depicted here, I am a bit skeptical of created "man" taking on the title of Creator "God"; and, of course, the typical way humans talk, with slang, and cliche's is not how I believe God Almighty speaks. But it IS creative thinking...(the world was created in 7 days, yes...but the Universe we do not know.) Don't dispair, however, I am only one in hundreds of critiquers or commenters...and it's just a personal opinion. Perhaps too picky. (Smile.) Nice writing and beautiful scenes.