The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/07
There has GOT to be more - or for more of a word count!

You did a great job with the word count availble but I sure wanted it to continue.

This is a fanstaic story written so well. Wow!
01/20/07
A beautifully written story that seized my attention from the get go. And, I wasn't disappointed! Very, very creative, very well written and well worth this reader's stopover to this site! In short...I loved it! Kudos.
01/21/07
A captivating read and a very creative take on the topic. Well done.
Beautiful! I was with you all the way!
01/22/07
Marty, you had BETTER write more for this, or I might just have to hunt you down! ;) I was completely engaged from the first word to the last. Your description was extremely vivid, and I so want to know more about these wonderfully fascinating characters!
I could feel the warmth of the wall. This is fantastic work. Blessings on your writing.