The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/07
Your last sentence is so true! Praise God for His working through you and your willingness to let Him.
Yes, those are the words of life we all need - straight from the quill or God. Very well communicated. Shows the humble heart of a true pastor.
01/22/07
Very visual - I could definitely "see" this. I must admit I was a bit distracted by a few grammar and typographical errors, but I still enjoyed this very much!
01/23/07
Perhaps an anecdote or one of Jesus' favorite ways of snaring people's interest - "A Parable", would enhance this little gem on writing words given by the Holy Spirit. Just that little "something extra" to make your point. Just one persons suggestion...nice job.
01/25/07
"So many Christians just let the Pastor be their guide and were spiritually dead."

After much prayer and tears, I left a church like that. My heart aches for those who stayed, choosing to follow man rather than God. You have a life-changing message in this piece. I wish you would expand it.