The Official Writing Challenge
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This was so sweet! My eyes are teary. Thanks for sharing.
01/20/07
So compelling and lovely and wonderful. I truly loved this piece!
01/20/07
Loved this story! Such a sweet and sentamental story of mother and daughter. Kept me interested from beginning to end...with a little tear dropping at the finish. Great job. Well written.
01/20/07
Excellent. Catchy title and wonderful attention to details like the Flintstones vitamins and 80s clothes. Kept my attention all the way through. Thanks for sharing.
01/21/07
Such a touching story. I loved that the mother had written a note and left it on top of all the others. The final sentence ended the story beautifully. Great job!