The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/07
This is a cute idea.

It could use a bit of polish--you switch tenses a few times, and some of your dialog might read more smoothly with editing.

This piece definitely shows that you have a writer's heart and creativity. Thanks for sharing it.
I figured Angee's name had to mean something and you didn't disappoint. Great take on the topic. Oh and I liked your title; that's what drew me in.