The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/07
Clever idea!
01/20/07
Ditto Jan's comment, "clever idea"...but it needs an ending? You've left your reader dangling! First rule of writing is to satisfy your reader!! However...great dialogue and I repeat "Clever Idea"!
01/20/07
PS: I'd hate to be the Receptionist and have to answer the phone with that Tongue Twister..."Ready Writers' Writing Helpline"...try it! Wow. lol
01/21/07
Fun piece! Would this be a reference to that wonderful apologist and writer of children's books (a new movie of which came out recently)? Do I get a gold star??? ;)

ANYHOW - I definitely enjoyed this one. Such fun little details really make this one.
I liked this clever writing! I would like to read a bit more at the end, but I still thoroughly enjoyed it. Good job.
01/24/07
Hilarious! You had me laughing ALL the way through, even my brother liked this. Very creative and orginal. Loved the part with the detective-a bit of mystery is always perfect!
01/24/07
Way kool! Very enjoyable. Liked the format. I like reading a piece where its author wasn't afraid to stretch from the norm. Refreshing and inspiring. God bless.