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What an original story, and a very clever idea.

One more edit would proably have caught the errors in punctuation and the occasional run-on sentence.

Millie was an enjoyable character.
Plot and story line were very original. Watch the grammar in a few places and I would have liked to have seen more physical attributes for Millie so I could visualize her better. Otherwise nicely done.
Great description, especially in the beginning. I enjoyed this story very much. I found your MC a bit too easy to convince, but that may just be me. Great stuff!
Oh yes! Far beyond excellent story. Very unique and creative approach. I love willow trees too. Maybe if I switched from writing beneath a dusty ceiling fan to a tree, I might be able write this good. God bless.
Yes, I agree, a very original writing on the topic. I , too, love willows. I could see this woillow and Millie sitting beneath it with a notebook in her hand. The passage abut her winding herself around the tree with the chain was nicely described.
Not where, but why. Wonderful insight creatively expressed.
I thought this was really lovely! The plot twist was very clever. I liked what you did with the theme. Very original. Keep writing, Trina. I'd say this one is a "keeper." :-)