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I enjoyed this piece. However, I felt like a ping-pong ball bounching around inside your thoughts. I think I need a drink. One that has improved by the powerful process of zymurgy. ;)
I did not care about being bounced like a ping pong ball! I loved it. This was so true and I say THAT with a grin.
I love your use of humor but mostly I love your ending! It sums it all up perfectly!
I like this. It's unique and fun to read as well.
An enjoyable read with a great point. Well done!
This was such chuckling fun to read (you should earn "huge" points for creativity, for sure!). My favorite line:
"Sometimes we refine the quality out of a product." I so agree.
Very unique and humorous. Enjoyed the read. God bless.
The great Philosopher of modern times has spoken - and I have listened and learned. Some very wise and knowledgable statements here, which are worth re-reading. Thanks. The last statement about Christ and "It is Finished" touched me. Different, but ON TOPIC, and a fun and wise read.
An "A" for affect...or was that effect? Anyway, I enjoyed this in a very big way!
How fun was this ride! So enjoyable.