The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/07
What an awesome piece! I could see and feel everything you described. It gave me inspiration in my own writing.
*sings* I know who wrote this story. :-D Great job. Enjoyed spending the day with you.
01/14/07
What a lovely slice of your life! Your descriptions are so vivid. I enjoyed standing there in the kitchen with you.
01/16/07
Loved it! I have a dear friend who is an ESL teacher it felt like I was sharing her day as well. Excellent descriptions and the setting was reflected brilliantly.
01/16/07
I don't need a hint to 'know' who this is and I loved every word of it!

I could see and smell the pizza. I could her their struggle with their new vocabulary. I was there in the kitchen using the 'scales.' ;)

I'm so glad you had time to write and enter this glimpse into your life as a foriegn teacher in Asia. It's a gem. Love,Pat