The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this! Great writing that held my attention and created suspense. Made me wonder what I would ask for. :-) I thought your ending fell a little short for the quality of this piece.
Your description was wonderfully fun and engaging, and I enjoyed the banter between the man and the fairy - and your first line was awesome. I agree with Crista, though - this deserved a more fleshed out, visual ending . Still loved it though!
I loved it .. the quality of writing was so wonderful. I especially liked the visuals of the fairy making backwards somersaults.
Ah...I'm glad I stopped to read this. So fun. And very sweet. An enjoyable read.
Wow, what a great story. Makes you stop to think about what is really important.
Good story. You had my attention all the way through.