The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
The first paragraph about a person named "Harold", a glaring and a leaving was completely alien to the rest of the story; at least it seemed that way to me. Anyway, the Chinese proverb is true. Your story was a reminder of this.
01/11/07
That would be so hard! Glad that your narrator came up with a good solution.
01/11/07
Nice story. I can relate to this. I was lost a bit at first. The moral was tied in wonderfully.
01/15/07
Don't know if this was true or not but it certainly could have been. Well done and very believable. I liked that it came to a good resolution. Good job.