The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/07
Great lesson - and a wonderful way of teaching it! Watch your POV shifts. I loved both of your characters! Would love to hear more about both of them.
01/18/07
Delightful and well written piece. Just a couple of typos that don't distract from the story at all. Congrats on the well deserved 2nd place and EC!!
01/20/07
Congratulatons on your second-place win! A lovely story! What a wonderful home that would be! Each caring and giving the time needed to build others up. Beautiful story!
01/26/07
Wow - I love this story! My parents are about to adopt a foster-child, so I can totally relate to how important it is to show God's love through thick and thin. It is truly an investment. Thank you for blessing me with this article.