The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute story - good ending. What I noticed is I think you changed your POV from the girl to Grandma. A few minor typos but overall good writing - good emotions and written realistically. :)
What a precious story! I guess you did change POV a couple times, but I didn't really notice, as I was still "inside" Desiree, watching and listening to all the wisdom Grandma Tessie had to share. Did you ever take me back in time to my own grandmother's kitchen! Thanks for bringing a wonderful message through this story vehicle (my favorite kind of "devotional").
A delicious way to teach valuable life lessons.
This is a wonderful story. The title definitely got my attention and then I truly enjoyed reading onward. I loved the description of each ingredient's
"purpose". Excellent job!