The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
This is a wonderful tribute to MaryAnne. If it's true, I hope you share it with her relatives.

My only nitpick is with all those exclamation points--they tend to make the reader feel smacked around a bit (although with something nice, like a bag of marshmallows).

Very sweet story.
01/11/07
What a great tribute to a wonderful lady. This was a wonderful piece that brought tears to my eyes. Fantastic job.
I think you read my heart with this. Every word penned is a reflection of what I've gone through these past two months. Thanks for writing this.