The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
Very good! I wonder if it should just end with your narrator saying "Onions and sour milk." The rest of the lesson is perhaps a tad redundant.

I really liked this character, could totally relate to her.
I like this a lot. I saw myself in your main character. Thanks for this message wrapped up in an enjoyable read.
Awesome message here!
01/14/07
Good lesson on the importance of the mundane. I liked your descriptions - they are vivid and give life to your story. Well done.
01/18/07
Excellent, wonderful story with a delightful lesson. Congrats on your EC placing!