The Official Writing Challenge
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This is precious!
Very good! You are definately an advanced writer.
Adorable story. The emphasis on older and younger seem out of place with twins. Good job drawing the reader into each new ingredient.
I could picture the whole scenario! How like boys! And a very good job of writing too. I almost felt like I was watching a sitcom! Well done!
This was so much fun! I loved the antics and reactions of the boys - that was definitely the strongest part of this. I found some of the end a bit weak - more telling than showing - but still absolutely delightful!
Very cute!
It was as if I were standing right there in the kitchen with these two! A true pleasure to read.
Very visual and charming. It brought back memories! Good juob on your first advanced entry!
"Cooking up trouble" indeed! I'm glad mom didn't flip her lid. I especially like how you show that trouble is not always malicious or foolish, just children being children. Great job.