The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
This is precious!
Very good! You are definately an advanced writer.
01/15/07
Adorable story. The emphasis on older and younger seem out of place with twins. Good job drawing the reader into each new ingredient.
01/15/07
I could picture the whole scenario! How like boys! And a very good job of writing too. I almost felt like I was watching a sitcom! Well done!
01/16/07
This was so much fun! I loved the antics and reactions of the boys - that was definitely the strongest part of this. I found some of the end a bit weak - more telling than showing - but still absolutely delightful!
01/16/07
Very cute!
It was as if I were standing right there in the kitchen with these two! A true pleasure to read.
Very visual and charming. It brought back memories! Good juob on your first advanced entry!
01/17/07
"Cooking up trouble" indeed! I'm glad mom didn't flip her lid. I especially like how you show that trouble is not always malicious or foolish, just children being children. Great job.