The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
Good allegory and nice descriptions of the table. I had hoped to hear a bit of what she had to say!

Be careful of sentence structure--there were a few run-ons and a few fragments.

I enjoyed reading this, and you did a great job with the text from Proverbs.
01/17/07
A very creative approach to the topic and very nicely done.