The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
Awesome!
01/11/07
Be kind to me when you fly into masters without me! Really tremendous writing and imagination - too many favorite lines to quote here. But, ok, here's one: "Men
swarmed around like flies on a camelís tail." Great job!!
01/13/07
I love Laban's voice - and how well you gave each character his/her own voice. Great stuff.
01/15/07
LOL! This was a hilarious 'reaccount' of an old and familiar story. I just love the cooking twist. It was a little confusing to read in the beginning about what Laban was saying, but it smoothed out in the next paragraph. Loved the end with the cruise on the Nile. Great writing here!
Hehehe, great job!
What a fun way to tell a Bible story. Love the humor sprinkled throughout. Nicely done.
01/16/07
Very cute!
Great! hehe - awesome play!
01/16/07
That was a great piece...Definitely put a smile on my face!
01/16/07
Momsy? Too funny! This was fantastic all the way through. A delight to read and visualize.

Truly talented work. *clap, clap*
01/17/07
What a riot! Definitely a comedic gift here. A fun read. Well done!