The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
This gave me goosebumps - and deservedly so. Good parallels about 'father' - good message. Enchanting and a delightful read!
01/11/07
Wonderful--loved the non-preachifying message, and the cyber-smell of baking doughnuts!
Loved this. Your characters are quite believable, and I I want a doughnut. ;0)
This is a story to remember.
01/25/07
What a "sweet" poignant story of how people impact the lives of others.